Writing Wednesday: Lazy Writing (Adept)

As I said last week, I’m going to share with you on Writing Wednesdays how I’m creating my new novel Adept, the next in the Flight of the Kestrel series.

Map & compass

I don’t know about you, but initially when I’m writing my mind is full of the main points of the story, which I want to get down as quickly as possible. When I wrote Adept, I just had the basic outline, with none of the finer details worked out. Because I wrote it for NaNoWriMo, I just jumped straight in. Quite often, I didn’t stop to work out what happened in between the main events, or how the characters got from one incident to another.

The story begins with three crewmen from the Kestrel locked in a cell after a spying mission went wrong. I had this part worked out quite well: they meet another prisoner who has been tortured, and Parks [Nathaniel Parks, Kestrel’s First Officer] is taken away for interrogation. After Parks comes back in quite a state, they plan to jump the guards next time they come in. They also decide to take the other prisoner with them. The plan works.

Then the novel says, ‘Together they made it to the exit without any problem, and the door opened at a touch of the badge against the panel.’

That’s because I hadn’t worked out how they were actually going to escape! Now, that kind of writing is really unacceptable. There are times in a novel when you don’t want to detail every minute, because nothing significant happens. Saying, ‘two hours later they arrived,’ is fine. But here we are in the middle of an exciting escape, and the reader will want to know what happens.

So, I’m working on it. I’m adding deeper description and characterisation too, but the biggest job is putting in the lazy bits I left out!


About Ann Marie Thomas

Married since 1974, Christian since 1986, 4 children, 4 grand children, disabled with fibromyalgia but was working almost full time until a stroke in May 2010 changed my life completely. Writing poetry and making up stories since I was a child, I only started to write seriously when my children were grown. My main ambition is to write science fiction, but along the way I got distracted by local history and poetry about my stroke. Taking early retirement gave me the chance to concentrate on my writing. My book, Alina, The White Lady of Oystermouth, was published in print and ebook at Easter 2012. The success of Alina led to the publication of Broken Reed: The Lords of Gower and King John in September 2013, and The Magna Carta Story at Easter 2015. I am still writing science fiction - a series of novels called Flight of the Kestrel. For all my author news, see me author blog at www.annmariethomas.me.uk
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